Love Means More

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This has a really nice opening, beginning with the doves, and the poem/song in general has a pleasantly gentle tone, which is also good.
When read Citrine's stuff today about how daily mind is beyond all searching, it struck me that it was kind of like what I wanted to push in this bird song. I am in love and the birds are somehow connected to my love and I see them and they keep saying what want to say, every species of them. Every alliteration in their flutterings. Their stupid bird behaviors are bigger than they are. As my lexical flappings can be too. If I listen to the birds, they will fly me outa here. If I am a bird - programmed or wise - I am already outa here. Come with.

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